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Published on March 17, 2008

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Thesis Workshop Presented by: Brent A. Simoneaux March 15, 2008 Neijiang Normal University

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Thesis papers are by definition argumentative essays. Our students are really good at writing exposition , of their thesis papers end up being expository essays . argument

Spectrum of Content exposition argumentation facts & information facts & information + analysis argument

“ The aim or purpose of argument is to use logic (both inductive and deductive) to create reasoned communication of ideas, insights, and experiences to some audience so as to produce a new understanding of some issue for that audience.” argument

Today, we will be talking about ideals . Remember that ideals cannot always be realized in reality. Today’s T o pics

Titles & Topics Outlines Today’s T o pics

Titles & Topics

Outlines

Before we go any farther, we need to get our vocabulary straight. Title: Introduces the topic of the argument as well as generate interest in reading the argument Topic: States the general subject of the paper Titles & T o pics

Titles and topics are intimately related to and intertwined with thesis statements . Often, thesis statement is defined as the “central idea of a paper.” Titles & T o pics

However, a better definition would be the following: “ A writer’s reasoned conclusion about some issue or writing problem.” Titles & T o pics

This definition of thesis statement recalls our definition of argument as well as the original meaning of the word. As Greek logicians used this word, it meant a “premise or proposition to be stated and then proved through logical analysis and argumentation.” Titles & T o pics

Titles & T o pics Thesis statements usually help define a writer’s purpose for some audience. More importantly, a thesis statement focuses both the writer’s and reader’s attention on specific issues to be developed within an essay.

But how are titles, topics, and thesis statements related? Titles & T o pics

Generally, the writing process occurs in this way: Choose a general topic Refine topic through research, invention, drafting, etc. Titles, T o pics, and Thesis Statements

Generally, the writing process occurs in this way:

Choose a general topic

Refine topic through research, invention, drafting, etc.

Generally, the writing process occurs in this way: Create tentative thesis statements that reflect your research / thinking Choose a tentative thesis statement to pursue through writing Titles, T o pics, and Thesis Statements

Generally, the writing process occurs in this way:

Create tentative thesis statements that reflect your research / thinking

Choose a tentative thesis statement to pursue through writing

Generally, the writing process occurs in this way: Create a tentative outline using key ideas from tentative thesis statement Draft using tentative outline Titles, T o pics, and Thesis Statements

Generally, the writing process occurs in this way:

Create a tentative outline using key ideas from tentative thesis statement

Draft using tentative outline

Generally, the writing process occurs in this way: 7. Make changes to thesis statement and outline as you draft 8. Choose a title that reflects the content of your final draft and creates interest in the reader Titles, T o pics, and Thesis Statements

In other words, thesis statements are a result of the writer’s best reasoned and logical thinking about a topic . Titles are a reflection of this the thesis statement that arouse interest in the reader. Titles, T o pics, and Thesis Statements

If students are going to have the best learning experience , their focus (and yours) must absolutely be on the process , not the product . Titles, T o pics, and Thesis Statements

How do we teach our students to create effective argumentative thesis statements? Thesis Stat e ments

Features: Makes an argumentative assertion about a topic; it states the conclusions that you have reached about your topic. Thesis Stat e ments

Features: Makes a promise to the reader about the scope, purpose, and direction of your paper. Thesis Stat e ments

Features: Is focused and specific enough to be "proven" within the boundaries of your paper. Thesis Stat e ments

Features: Is generally located near the end of the introduction; sometimes, in a long paper, the thesis will be expressed in several sentences or in an entire paragraph. Thesis Stat e ments

Features: Identifies the relationship between the pieces of evidence that you are using to support your argument. Thesis Stat e ments

Features: It must be arguable. In order for it to be arguable, it must present a view that someone might reasonably contest. In other words, the writer must take a stand on an issue or make a claim that can be defended. Thesis Stat e ments

Analytical Thesis Statement A thesis statement that analyzes the relationship among various significant ideas contained in the thesis sentence(s) Thesis Stat e ments

Structure of Analytical Thesis Statements This pattern can serve as an aid: Independent clause(s) + restricting clause(s) [general ideas are stated] [qualifying idea(s) defined] Thesis Stat e ments

Structure of Analytical Thesis Statements Example: “ University education is more beneficial than technical training [ independent / generalization ] because at the university the students have the opportunity to learn technical and career related skills as well as to acquire perspectives on life from studying subjects like philosophy, art, and literature [ restricting idea ] . ” Thesis Stat e ments

Group work instructions: Create an analytical argumentative thesis statement for each person in your group Try to locate attempts at thesis statements in a student paper. Try to correct the thesis statement. Compare the statements with handout and the structure of analytical thesis statements Thesis Stat e ments

Group work instructions:

Create an analytical argumentative thesis statement for each person in your group

Try to locate attempts at thesis statements in a student paper. Try to correct the thesis statement.

Compare the statements with handout and the structure of analytical thesis statements

If you have a good analytical thesis statement, creating an outline is relatively easy. O utlining

O utlining “ A thesis statement focuses both the writer’s and reader’s attention on specific issues to be developed within an essay.” In addition, analytical thesis statements analyze the relationship among these significant ideas. As you can see, it is fairly easy to isolate ideas that should be developed in your essay.

There are essentially two major ways to draft an outline from a thesis statement: Isolating key ideas to be developed Using informal logic O utlining

There are essentially two major ways to draft an outline from a thesis statement:

Isolating key ideas to be developed

Using informal logic

O utlining From Thesis Statement to Outline Example: “ University education is more beneficial than technical training [ independent / generalization ] because at the university the students have the opportunity to learn technical and career related skills as well as to acquire perspectives on life from studying subjects like philosophy, art, and literature [ restricting idea ] . ”

From Thesis Statement to Outline Example: We immediately recognize that the driving organizational force behind the thesis statement is comparison & contrast . At the most general level, we are comparing & contrasting university education to technical training. O utlining

From Thesis Statement to Outline Example: The restricting idea helps us focus the general comparison to two major focus points: Opportunities to learn Perspectives on life O utlining

From Thesis Statement to Outline

Example:

The restricting idea helps us focus the general comparison to two major focus points:

Opportunities to learn

Perspectives on life

From Thesis Statement to Outline Example: There is one more key idea that is implicit in the thesis statement (this would be easily recognizable using informal logic): “ Acquiring perspectives on life in addition to technical and career related skills is more beneficial than acquiring only technical and career related skills.” O utlining

From Thesis Statement to Outline Now, let’s create an outline from these key ideas. As you know, with comparison & contrast there are two ways to organize our outline: Subject by subject Point by point O utlining

From Thesis Statement to Outline

Now, let’s create an outline from these key ideas.

As you know, with comparison & contrast there are two ways to organize our outline:

Subject by subject

Point by point

From Thesis Statement to Outline Let’s not forget our implicit key idea: “ Acquiring perspectives on life in addition to technical and career related skills is more beneficial than acquiring only technical and career related skills.” O utlining

From Thesis Statement to Outline Now, let’s try to think through this a different way: by using informal logic . Look at logic handouts. O utlining

O utlining Deductive conclusion Inductive premise From Thesis Statement to Outline “ University education is more beneficial than technical training [ independent / generalization ] because at the university the students have the opportunity to learn technical and career related skills as well as to acquire perspectives on life from studying subjects like philosophy, art, and literature [ restricting idea ] . ”

Syllogism: Inductive Premise 1 : At the university the students have the opportunity to learn technical and career related skills as well as to acquire perspectives on life from studying subjects like philosophy, art, and literature Premise 2: ? Deductive conclusion : University education is more beneficial than technical training O utlining

From Thesis Statement to Outline Syllogism: Inductive Premise 2: Acquiring perspectives on life in addition to technical and career related skills is more beneficial than acquiring only technical and career related skills. O utlining

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